EngC assignment - re-writing using alliteration

[tsukikage]

Once upon a time, a brother and sister named Hansel and Gretel lived in a cottage in the middle of a large forest. Their stepmother hated them both, and wanted to get rid of them, so one day she sent them out for a walk, suggesting that they use bread crumbs to find their path home. Early one morning, Hansel and Gretel set off into the woods.

Once when we weren't born yet, two crazy kids called handome Hansel and good-natured Gretel, lived in a little college lying in the center of a large forest. Their suspiciously stoney stempmother sought to send off these children, for she fought with them for their father's attention. During dinner one day, she told them to travel towards the trees, returning along the remains of scattered rye. The next day, this they did.

Comments

[stiffie.livejournal.com]

I fully and flat-out fancy alliteration! ;)