Outline 2.0 Officially Approved
Apr. 29th, 2010 11:03 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
tsukikageSemagic hates me, so I'm posting this via *gasp* my browser
Hi Nastassja-
I have taken a look at your document. Truthfully, it's not what I was expecting from this project.... but I still like it! You have very original ideas, and I am interested to see what you come up with. As long as you support your findings with the research (both your own primary data plus credible outside sources), I think your project sounds viable. The only two things I would caution you on, are 1) don't have too many subpoints for one point, and not for another; all points should have equal development, roughly. 2) Be careful that your points do not overlap. I saw some similar ideas repeated throughout the outline.
Anyway, that's my two cents. I look forward to reading the final version.
Best, Amber
That's a relief. I do need to keep her points on keeping the points equally developed, and especially on not letting the points overlap. I was talking to some people about my outline last night and talking about just that - right now my points all sort of flow into each other, especially the sub-points for my second point about self-disclosure on the internet aids relationships.
This should really be my official icon for posts related to this project.
Slept pretty much a full night last night, and still I have my damn headache...
Appointment with the urologist at 2:15.
Hi Nastassja-
I have taken a look at your document. Truthfully, it's not what I was expecting from this project.... but I still like it! You have very original ideas, and I am interested to see what you come up with. As long as you support your findings with the research (both your own primary data plus credible outside sources), I think your project sounds viable. The only two things I would caution you on, are 1) don't have too many subpoints for one point, and not for another; all points should have equal development, roughly. 2) Be careful that your points do not overlap. I saw some similar ideas repeated throughout the outline.
Anyway, that's my two cents. I look forward to reading the final version.
Best, Amber
That's a relief. I do need to keep her points on keeping the points equally developed, and especially on not letting the points overlap. I was talking to some people about my outline last night and talking about just that - right now my points all sort of flow into each other, especially the sub-points for my second point about self-disclosure on the internet aids relationships.
This should really be my official icon for posts related to this project.
Slept pretty much a full night last night, and still I have my damn headache...
Appointment with the urologist at 2:15.
