Okay, I'm calling that my rough draft. Intensive editing shall occur tomorrow.
Y'know, editing my thesis, adding 24+ words, massive de-clunkification, adding citations, picking an audience... >.> <.<
Anyone who wants to read and comment, feel free.
( Assignment info under the cut: )
And here's a link to my paper.
Y'know, editing my thesis, adding 24+ words, massive de-clunkification, adding citations, picking an audience... >.> <.<
Anyone who wants to read and comment, feel free.
( Assignment info under the cut: )
And here's a link to my paper.